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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

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In modern society, there are numerous
graduates
 with high education who are unemployed. In
this
 essay, I will be proposing the reasons for highly qualified
graduates
' unemployment and possible solutions for them.
First
 of all, the lack of experience from young
workers
 will be the
first
 reason. These
workers
 are usually fresh
graduates
, which have had no long-term job experience before. In comparison, aged
workers
 tend to have better skills than the freshmen of society,
hence
employers
 are usually less interested in young
graduates
. The
second
 reason would be the rarity of job opportunities in the current market.
For instance
, in 2019, the COVID-19 pandemic caused many people to lose their jobs globally.
Moreover
, many companies' income had come to a new low. In
this
 situation, only fewer job opportunities will be released into the market.
However
, I believe there are two possible solutions to
this
 problem. From the perspective of
employers
 to solve the problem,
employers
 should abandon the old-mined opinions of newer generations since young
workers
 are more willing to learn new expertise, and they demand less in wages
nevertheless
.
Employers
 should be more willing to treat new and old
workers
 equally and provide the same opportunities.
In addition
, from the societal perspective,
although
 the world's economy is brought down by the pandemic,
however
, companies like Google or Apple, are less likely to have bad revenue,
therefore
 they can be providing jobs to these new highly qualified
graduates
. To conclude,
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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