You are working for a company. You need to take sometime off and want to ask your manager about this. write a letter to your manager Explain why you want to take time off Give details of the amount of time you need Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

Dear Anna, I am writing to you to check if there is any possibility that I could apply for

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time off

work

since I am planning a family trip of a few days, out of the country since we will be celebrating my 05th wedding anniversary. Kindly note that I will be using my 14 days of annual leave in lieu of

this

from 07th December 2022 until 21st December 2022. I have selected

this

time of the year as we have less

work

during

this

time of the year, my husband will

also

find it easier to apply for leave during

this

period and my children will be on school holidays. Please note that

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in my ,absence Isuri who is currently handling the same scope of

work

will cover for me during

this

period as she will be in the office. I will make sure I record the

work

that needs to be followed up and will brief her on what needs to be done so that my

work

will be not missed.

However

, I have activated IDD roaming and will be available during the

daytimetime

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daytime time

day time time

if there are any

further

clarifications required. Hope you understand and will consider my request. Looking forward to your favourable response. Thanking you in advance Yours faithfully, Andrea

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9 paragraphs

216 words

7.00

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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