You are working for a company. You need to take sometime off and want to ask your manager about this. write a letter to your manager Explain why you want to take time off Give details of the amount of time you need Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

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Dear Anna, I am writing to you to check if there is any possibility that I could apply for

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time off

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since I am planning a family trip of a few days, out of the country since we will be celebrating my 05th wedding anniversary. Kindly note that I will be using my 14 days of annual leave in lieu of

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from 07th December 2022 until 21st December 2022. I have selected

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time of the year as we have less

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during

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time of the year, my husband will

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find it easier to apply for leave during

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period and my children will be on school holidays. Please note that

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in my ,absence Isuri who is currently handling the same scope of

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will cover for me during

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period as she will be in the office. I will make sure I record the

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that needs to be followed up and will brief her on what needs to be done so that my

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will be not missed.

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, I have activated IDD roaming and will be available during the

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daytime time

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clarifications required. Hope you understand and will consider my request. Looking forward to your favourable response. Thanking you in advance Yours faithfully, Andrea

nayomi28Tue Sep 20 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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9 paragraphs

216 words

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