International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

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Nowadays,
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who visit
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foreign countries produce large profits all over the world.
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, some people are anxious about its affection
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local residents and the
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. Personally, I think that the disadvantages of international
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the advantages. International tourism produced some advantages.
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, accepting many
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will increase the consumption in the sightseeing areas, and it will be the growth of the local economy.
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, because of the rise
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demand for recreational facilities and hotels, the employment situation in that areas will improve dramatically.
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, there are many down points are made by international
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. In some sightseeing spots located in the natural landscapes, forests are destroyed to build hotels for
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, and it is an example of severe damage
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the natural
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. Damages to the sea
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caused by the waste abandoned by
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beachsides
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severe and it will ruin the fishing industry around the region. In urban areas, the moving of
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may disturb the daily lives of local inhabitants.
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, in Kyoto, the sightseeing spot
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famous for a lot of traditional temples in Japan, heavy traffic jams and the delay in public transportations caused by too many
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bother the commuting
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people. To conclude, I believe that the weak points of International tourism will beyond the profits because the troubles,
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, damaging the natural
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and disturbing the daily lives of local people, will offset the economical and industrial profit brought to local regions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enormous benefit
  • impact
  • local inhabitants
  • environment
  • disadvantages
  • outweigh
  • advantages
  • economic benefits
  • job creation
  • cultural exchange
  • infrastructure development
  • promotion
  • local products
  • environmental impact
  • exploitation
  • resources
  • cultural erosion
  • increased cost of living
  • overcrowding
  • congestion
  • balancing
  • benefits
  • disadvantages
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