Your colleague recently gave you a book. You had a presentation, and this book helped you in the presentation. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, • tell the topic of your presentation • why the presentation was important for you • how the book helped you in presentation

Dear Mr John, I am writing to express my gratitude for your timely help in rendering me the book on "
Data
Science", which helped me to deliver my presentation in a successful way. I am so delighted that the presentation has given me a very good impression of my high-level management. As a contact centre company, we are more focused on the accuracy of the analysis and representation of the
data
. My presentation is to explain the core concepts in
Data
Analysis and to brief on the basic algorithms that are planned to be implemented in our upcoming projects. It is an important presence as the audience consisted of all the global heads of our technical team and it showcases our knowledge in the field of
data
science which plays a key role in winning the projects for my team. I would like to inform you that the book you gave me was of immense help in understanding the logic of programming in
Data
Science and highlight the key concepts that would be of great interest to product management. Thank you for the timely help. Regards Kennedy
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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