Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In today’s world, the development of the country’s

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is the best priority of most nations, while some individuals claim that other metrics

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required the same

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for a country. In

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essay, I will analyse both views in order to formulate and explain my own. On the one hand,

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believe if their country has a stable financial status, they can easily overcome obstacles that are health, education and

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issues. Their government have the ability to invest in those fields when they need.

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, most of the wealthier nations

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as England and America paid special attention to economic

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.

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, they are potent in providing the best facilities to their dwellers.

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,

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reckon it is important to give the best priority to the

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of the

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.

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, others think, that while developing the

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, it is essential to improve the other areas simultaneously. In another word, it is impossible to achieve financial growth, without having a proper transportation system.

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is because a considerable amount of national income has been contributed by the public and other modes of

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.

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, according to the annual budget of India in 2020, one-fifth of total income has supported by the

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sector. So, other fields

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need equal interest.

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, the education system

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plays a vital role in economic

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. It produces doctors, nurses, engineers and lawyers who are having more potential for foreign income generate. In fact,

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most of the educated

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who were in low-income countries migrated to work in developed nations.

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, more dollars and pounds can be earned by their countries.

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, similar attention needed to be paid to other areas as well as the

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. In conclusion,

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few benefits can be seen when government give priority to financial

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, I believe

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can get more benefits if they pay equal

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interest on other metrics since

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and education have contributed to economic

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significantly.