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You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: say which advertisement you are answering describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about explain why you would be a suitable teacher

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Dear Sir/madam I am writing to apply for a teaching position in reference to an advertisement I read on your website
last
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 night, April 26th under the slogan “Enjoy Teaching, Join us
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”.
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, I have worked to would love to teach “Research Methods” and “Time Management” as I have noticed, after reading your
last
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year
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 curriculum, that these two courses are missing. As a
21st century
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 learner, it has become a must to be responsible for one’s own learning.
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, being able to manage time effectively
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 mastering the techniques of carrying out research would bring ample benefits to every single learner at your college.
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, I am aware that have the same background and passed through the same education system which would help me to teach them
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 their requirement and understanding. As far as the curriculum of the course is concerned, It is relatively matching with my experience and education.
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, I would like to recommend myself for the post as advertised in the daily newspaper and enclosing herewith my resume for your kind consideration and
opportunity
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 to meet with you
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 a call
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interview. I look forward to hearing from you. yours faithfully, kira .

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General Writing Improvement
Make sure to proofread for minor grammatical and formatting mistakes, such as inconsistent casing in 'yours faithfully' and punctuation errors.
Task Achievement Improvement
Clarify your reasons for wanting to teach the specific courses to enhance completeness.
Content
The letter clearly states the courses you are interested in teaching and why they are important.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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