In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is widely argued that a large amount of money should be used for the construction of new

railway

lines that operates expresses between cities.

In contrast

, some people insist that the necessity of improving the existing public transporting system. Both opinions are persuasive to some extent, but I agree with the former opinion. If the new

railway

is constructed, it will have a positive impact on the rural

areas

. In recent years, mainly elderly people who cannot drive vehicles by themselves have some difficulties in their daily lives,

for example

, shopping and going to see a doctor, because of the lack of public transportation. The new

railway

that reaches the countryside may solve

this

problem.

Moreover

, the structuring of railways will bring the demand for employees and increase consumption in the

areas

around the new stations, and it will make

growth

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of the local economy.

On the other hand

, Improving existing public transport may contribute to more comfortable use of public transportations in urban

areas

.

For example

, relieving the congestion of trains

in

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the

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rush hour by increasing the number of trains is one of the reasonable and efficient ways to improve people’s satisfaction with public transportation.

Furthermore

, building a more functional station

that is

equipped with many shops and childcare services will be useful for commuting people. In conclusion, while building new

railway

lines mainly contributes to

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rural

areas

, increasing of functions of existing public transportation will have a positive impact on cities. Personally, I believe that the policy that insists new construction of railways will be the better way to use a large amount of money.