The importance of biodiversity is being more widely recognized as increasing numbers of species come under threat. What can be done to maintain biodiversity?

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Preserving the environment has turned
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a vital controversy in recent years; since
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range of animals and species are in danger of extinction.
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, biodiversity must be efficiently reserved through governmental and social activities. It is proven that government has a significant contribution
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preservation programs. To start, enacting efficient
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and regulations plays a key role. To be more precise,
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must establish clear rules to constrain destructive actions
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as hunting. Correspondingly, punishments and penalties should be intensified in order to terrify criminals.
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, considering nature reserve plans can sustain the quality of biodiversity in the protected area.
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, both captivities and sanctuaries can secure animals’ welfare. These places are
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helpful to cure animals and rescue their lives. Apparently, societies must correlate with conservationists.
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and foremost, social awareness must be promoted via social media, television, news, etc. If individuals become conscious about saving the ecosystem, they can take part in constructive plans.
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,
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system should acknowledge students
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the importance of nature and warn them about corrosive activities.
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but not least, offering voluntary opportunities increases social participation.
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, Australian authorities asked people to report the location of rare animals that they see. To conclude briefly, saving
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biodiversity which requires seamless efforts to be solved, is a matter of political and social debates. Evidently, the highest achievements result from
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and
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cooperation.
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