You have been living in an apartment for the last three years. A few problems have emerged in your apartment since the last repair. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, give details of the last repair work what the problems are now how you would like the landlord to solve these problems

Dear Mr Keith, I am writing
to bring your attention to some of the problems that have emerged in the apartment, since the
To begin
with, let me remind you in which areas the repair was carried out the
, they repaired the rooftop tank, because it had a leak.
, they repaired the front gate, as it was hard to close. Though they complete the above tasks, the problems remain the same, after a few days of use. The rooftop tank leak still appears as I can see wet walls in the kitchen, and I assume
time it is a little bit on the worse side because the area of the wet patch is getting bigger day by day.
On the other hand
, I can not lock the front gate from the inside now,
I feel a little bit insecure here, as there were some robberies reported in the neighbourhood
week. It would be great if you come over here to inspect what has happened already, or else if you are unable to come, could please send a professional as soon as possible to fix these issues? I am sure they can be fixed with a little effort. I would appreciate your immediate attention to
matter, and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Supun
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