Some people believe that scientists have the greatest influence on the world.  Other people, however, think that the influence of politicians is greater.  Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In today’s interconnected
world
, influence is key in shaping and reshaping the
world
. Many
people
consider
politicians
as those who have much sway over the general direction of society. But there are those who think
scientists
are the true driving force.
However
, others believe
scientists
are more influential.
This
is primarily because the
world
is what it is because of what
scientists
have already created,
seen
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the way that
people
can circle the globe in less than a day and contact loved ones instantly because of high-tech devices. Another reason is that much of what the
world
will become depends upon the ongoing work of
scientists
. Issues like climate change, resource sustainability, and vaccines for pandemics can only be resolved by these
scientists
. So what they are doing now and what they will continue to do in the future will greatly affect the
world
. Between the two, I believe that
politicians
have more influence.
Although
I acknowledge that scientific contributions have truly changed our way of life,
politicians
are still directly affecting
people
daily because of their policies. In fact,
politicians
often influence what
scientists
research as the government usually has a hand in many key research projects, especially those that may revolutionise how
people
live.  In conclusion, even if
scientists
are working toward solutions,
politicians
are still the ones directing which problems to solve and who should first benefit from the results.
Therefore
, the true power is in the
politicians
’ hands.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • innovations
  • breakthroughs
  • unprecedented
  • dynamic
  • technological advancements
  • legislation
  • diplomacy
  • socioeconomic policies
  • geopolitical
  • benchmark
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