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happiness is considered very important in life. why is it difficult to define? what factors are important in acheiving happiness?

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Happiness
 is a very complex thing to define. according to each people, the concept of
happiness
 is different. Some people are happy when they achieve high achievements, while for others,
happiness
 is simply living together with their loved ones.
Although
 everyone's concept of
happiness
 is not
same
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. in my opinion,
happiness
 will be based on two basic conditions, the
first
 is economic,
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second
 is
health
. people who have both of these factors are more likely to achieve
happiness
 To answer why the economy plays an important part in achieving
happiness
, it is because a stable economy can meet the most basic human needs
such
 as food and entertainment. .
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Although
althoung
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although
 having a lot of
money
 doesn't mean you would be easy with life, at least it has to be enough for food. you can't live without eating, and we need
money
 to pay for it The
second
 is
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good mental and physical
health
. Try to imagine if you have everything you have always wished for, including
money
, fame and success, but
on the
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 you do not have
a
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good
health
,
then
 all will become meaningless. If you have a lot of
money
 but every day you are going through the pain of your illnesses, will you be happy? the answer obviously is no. In short, the concept of
happiness
 is difficult to define, and the factors that
make up
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happiness
 are different from person to person. But I still keep my point of view that, in order to be happy, two basic conditions must be met: economic and
health
.
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