Some people believe that homework should not be given to school children. Others, however, say that homework is an important requirement for children to be able to develop appropriately. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Knowledge
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us different from animals and acts as
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in
development
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the development
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of society. Educational institutes
such
as colleges,
schools
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and schools
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are some of the places from which
knowledge
can be obtained and used. School
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children
childrens
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children
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are assigned
homework
,
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so that they can
practise
there
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knowledge
by implementing it.
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essay will discuss the importance of
homework
and whether or not it should be assigned to the
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children
children's
childrens
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children
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.
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Children's
Children
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Children
are
future
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the future
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of our society and it is our responsibility to make the future bright and healthy. So the question is what is
homework
? The
homework
is actually more or less like a
practise
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of a particular
topic
something that has already been taught in the class students are just asked to revise it or solve it. A portion of the population believes that
homework
is not as important as it is
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portrayed
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. They believe, that classwork is enough and
homework
is not essential.
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the professor does
there
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their
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work, by explaining the
topic
and solving some problems. If an individual is not assigned
with
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homework
, yes he may have the
knowledge
but, without practice and
implementation
of the
knowledge
with
time
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it will fade away. Classwork mainly provides us with the theory part and some insights
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the
topic
implementation
, it is the
homework
that helps us
practise
that
topic
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implementation
of it. So
for example
: If at the
the
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particular lecture you learned about the theory of light but, no
homework
was assigned to you after 3-4 months when you are attempting the exam on the same
topic
, if you are very lucky you will still remember something about the
topic
but as in most cases, without
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and self
implementation
children tend to fail the exam. While
,
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that was the case with some
part
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of the population. But the other portion of it believes that
homework
is an important aspect
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development
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the development
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of the children. As we already know
what
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homework
is,
what
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and what
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is its function in the
development
of a young mind.
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homework
, basically just provides us with
practise
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. It is that
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practice
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that
make
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our young minds perfect and ready to solve and deal with
the
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problems. But as it is said, that medicine if not provided in
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amount can result in
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outcome
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.
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does apply in
case
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the case
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of
homework
, a
child
should be provided with
the
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homework
, but it is the amount which is important, too less and it will not produce any positive results too much and it will just
creates
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more pressure on the
child
. So even though
the
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homework
is important and necessary in the
development
of the
child
it should be in proper amount with respect to the age so that it will provide the
child
with
it's
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benefit and he can perform the task without any pressure.
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