What distinguishes young people from their parents' or grandparents' generation is a lack of physical exercise. Today's generation are spending far too long playing computer games, chatting aimlessly on social networking sites or simply watching TV, and too little time being active. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It’s true that modern
people
have become lazier than their ancestors. The vital importance of making exercises on a daily basis has faded away. People
prefer relaxing at home over going to the gym. I completely agree with this
statement, as we are living in the
world where you can get absolutely everything without going out.
At the outset, there are Correct article usage
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numerous Correct article usage
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number of
reasons why human physical activity has decreased, but the most important Correct quantifier usage
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one
is on the surface and this
is technology. The whole industry encourages our children to lead sedentary
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a sedentary
lifestyle
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lifestyles
for instance
sitting in front of the computer playing different video games. Youtube offers the chance to sit and watch one
programme after the next
one
without stop
, you can even watch the whole tv show season Wrong verb form
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at
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in
one
day. Another example, a century ago there was
no remote controls which are used to switch the channels, Change the verb form
were
although
today people
can do everything without getting up, just moving one
finger. Consequently
, with fewer gyms and too many technological facilities, sickness and obesity have been killing many around the world.
Secondly
, physical activities were widespread in comparison with now. For instance
, big corporation
and companies even used to pay Fix the agreement mistake
corporations
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for sport
sport
classes like aerobics, yoga or Pilates for their employees. Nowadays as we can see the majority of jobs require mental abilities, Change the noun form
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and the
pass
time has switched to team computer gaming which is replacing Change the verb form
passing
practicing
sports.
To summarize, young Change the spelling
practising
people
today are less active and that is
definitely something that we should be concerned about. It would be wrong to put all the blame on technology, as the
progress is always good, but we should do our best and the government must introduce some obligor=tory activities for youngsters in order to improve the situation.Correct article usage
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