What distinguishes young people from their parents' or grandparents' generation is a lack of physical exercise. Today's generation are spending far too long playing computer games, chatting aimlessly on social networking sites or simply watching TV, and too little time being active. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It’s true that modern

people

have become lazier than their ancestors. The vital importance of making exercises on a daily basis has faded away.

People

prefer relaxing at home over going to the gym. I completely agree with

this

statement, as we are living in

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world where you can get absolutely everything without going out. At the outset, there are

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reasons why human physical activity has decreased, but the most important

one

is on the surface and

this

is technology. The whole industry encourages our children to lead

sedentary

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a sedentary

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lifestyle

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lifestyles

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,

for instance

sitting in front of the computer playing different video games. Youtube offers the chance to sit and watch

one

programme after the

next

one

without

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, you can even watch the whole tv show season

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one

day. Another example, a century ago there

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no remote controls which are used to switch the channels,

although

today

people

can do everything without getting up, just moving

one

finger.

Consequently

, with fewer gyms and too many technological facilities, sickness and obesity have been killing many around the world.

Secondly

, physical activities were widespread in comparison with now.

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, big

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and companies even used to pay

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for sport

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sport

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classes like aerobics, yoga or Pilates for their employees. Nowadays as we can see the majority of jobs require mental abilities,

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pass

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time has switched to team computer gaming which is replacing

practicing

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sports. To summarize, young

people

today are less active and

that is

definitely something that we should be concerned about. It would be wrong to put all the blame on technology, as

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progress is always good, but we should do our best and the government must introduce some obligor=tory activities for youngsters in order to improve the situation.