Write a letter to your friend who is starting an import/export business and asked you for recommendation for a product from your own country. In the letter, you should: - what the product will be - from which region of your country where it came from - why it is a good product to export.

Dear John, I hope you and your family are well.
First
of all, I want to congratulate you to start your import and export business. I must say that you deserved
this
and it all came through with your hard work, family's support and
finally
God's grace.
Also
, I
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feel
felt
felf
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feel
so honoured that you asked for my recommendation.
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on my experience in
this
business, I would strongly suggest you
to
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apply
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start
with
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importing shoes from India.
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