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Some people think that new houses should be built in older style. Others disagree and government should allow building houses of their own choice. Both views and opinion?

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House is a permanent safe place for a human being. At the end of the hectic ,day everyone preferred to be
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 comfortable place like home. Nowadays, it became a debatable issue whether
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 should be built in new styles according to the owner’s preference or in the old traditional style. In
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 essay, I will perceive both sides and my viewpoint are in favour of new styles over old construction.
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 with, some populace allured toward ancient styles of housing because
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the structure of the whole neighbourhood remained the same
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 every aspect like height, area and design etcetera. The main pros of
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 design are people cannot flaunt their wealth through
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 and every individual is perceived as equal in society.
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, In a Spanish village, all
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 are built equally the owner is wealthy or poor. Apart from that, traditional housing displays are heritage and the aura in which our elders used to live in joint families.
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, youngsters tried to avoid these circumstances old housing is a method to fill the void between two generations. On the flip side, the house is a reflection of the owner’s personality. So
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 should be built according to their wish for comfort and relaxation. Even the Government should approve new architecture without delay.
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, with advancements in technology,

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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