You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, • describe what you enjoyed about the course • say how much cooking you've done since the course • suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to provide my feedback about one of the cooking training courses that I availed at your institute.
First
of all, I thank you and the entire coaching staff for creating
such
a varied course on Greek cuisine. It was fun learning to cook items
such
as chicken souvlaki, pita sandwiches, rice, roasted potatoes, and so on.
In addition
to
this
, I liked the special attention given to the various sauce recipes as well.
Finally
, the personal attention given to individual queries during live classes is appreciated.
Additionally
, I am glad to share with you that I am able to cook an entire greek meal quicker and tastier than ever before. I have prepared approximately 10 dishes so far. which have turned out to be delicious.
Also
, I invited some of the guests the previous Saturday over dinner who praised my cooking skills and found the meal to be yummy. Could you please let me know why don’t you offer a Mexican cookery course? I am fond of Mexican food as well but find it strange that you don’t offer one. Please give a thought to commencing classes on nachos, quesadillas, tacos and other similar delicacies. I can assure you that these lessons will be equally popular. Thank you once again. Yours faithfully, Jai Vaswani
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