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As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#computers #languages #waste #time
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 of high technology,
people
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 be able to understand foreign
languages
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 without studying. Some
people
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 considered learning new
languages
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 a waste of
time
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. In my opinion, I believe that learning new
languages
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 could bring a lot of benefits which are worth spending
time
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 on. Admittedly, computers and mobile apps can translate different
languages
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 quickly and effectively which helps to save a lot of
time
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 in spending on learning new
languages
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.
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, recently I have been reading Spanish novels and the translation app helped me a lot to understand more about Spanish culture and tradition without understanding Spanish by myself.
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, computer translation programs are a great tool that helps to connect
people
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 around the globe together,
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, it offers more opportunities to learn about other cultures and traditions easily with less effort.
On the other hand
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, improving the
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's function is a great advantage of learning new
languages
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, the more
languages
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 you learn the more your
brain
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 gets stronger which can help to prevent some
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 function diseases
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 as dementia. Many studies showed that
people
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 who have learned foreign
languages
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 at a younger age have less chance to develop
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 diseases.
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, learning new
languages
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 would extend new experiences
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 as new friends from different countries, new food, art, and so on. For these reasons, learning foreign
languages
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 is very beneficial and
people
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 should spend more
time
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 on it. In conclusion,
although
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 computer translators or apps are a great tool, learning new
languages
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 could bring more benefits which are improving the
brain
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's functions and exploring new cultures. In my opinion, learning new
languages
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 is not a waste of
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, yet the thing
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 worth spending
time
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 on.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Computers are proficient in certain domains but struggle with complex language nuances
  • Machine translation lacks human touch and may not capture context accurately
  • Learning a foreign language is a valuable investment in personal development
  • Language learning fosters empathy and appreciation for different cultures
  • Multilingual individuals are in high demand in the job market
  • Acquiring new languages expands one's horizons and opens doors to new opportunities
  • Bilingualism enhances cognitive flexibility and problem-solving abilities
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