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As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#computers #languages #waste #time
As a result
 of high technology,
people
 be able to understand foreign
languages
 without studying. Some
people
 considered learning new
languages
 a waste of
time
. In my opinion, I believe that learning new
languages
 could bring a lot of benefits which are worth spending
time
 on. Admittedly, computers and mobile apps can translate different
languages
 quickly and effectively which helps to save a lot of
time
 in spending on learning new
languages
.
For example
, recently I have been reading Spanish novels and the translation app helped me a lot to understand more about Spanish culture and tradition without understanding Spanish by myself.
Additionally
, computer translation programs are a great tool that helps to connect
people
 around the globe together,
in other words
, it offers more opportunities to learn about other cultures and traditions easily with less effort.
On the other hand
, improving the
brain
's function is a great advantage of learning new
languages
, the more
languages
 you learn the more your
brain
 gets stronger which can help to prevent some
brain
 function diseases
such
 as dementia. Many studies showed that
people
 who have learned foreign
languages
 at a younger age have less chance to develop
brain
 diseases.
Additionally
, learning new
languages
 would extend new experiences
such
 as new friends from different countries, new food, art, and so on. For these reasons, learning foreign
languages
 is very beneficial and
people
 should spend more
time
 on it. In conclusion,
although
 computer translators or apps are a great tool, learning new
languages
 could bring more benefits which are improving the
brain
's functions and exploring new cultures. In my opinion, learning new
languages
 is not a waste of
time
, yet the thing
that is
 worth spending
time
 on.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Computers are proficient in certain domains but struggle with complex language nuances
  • Machine translation lacks human touch and may not capture context accurately
  • Learning a foreign language is a valuable investment in personal development
  • Language learning fosters empathy and appreciation for different cultures
  • Multilingual individuals are in high demand in the job market
  • Acquiring new languages expands one's horizons and opens doors to new opportunities
  • Bilingualism enhances cognitive flexibility and problem-solving abilities
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