Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is argued that people have various opportunities in modern society. In my opinion, I partially agree with

this

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statement since people in developed

countries

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indeed have a range of choices.

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,

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situation might be slightly different in some developing

countries

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. On the one hand, citizens in some developing

countries

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are not able to share the same right

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those in developed

countries

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.

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, developing

countries

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' residents confront

with

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apply

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the

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apply

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strict policy as well as management from the government, which

limit

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limits

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them in many ways.

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, in China,

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visa for heading

other

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to other

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countries

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can not be approved if the purpose is unclear.

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,

the

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apply

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age and gender can be the most prominent hinder when employees are searching

new

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for new

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jobs

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apply

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since some companies who have prejudices on these factors tend to reject the applications. Yet these issues

are less happened

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in developed

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.

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, some possibilities are stacked by the economic condition of families in developing

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since the government can't support them with financial

helps

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help

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.

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, concerning

about

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apply

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the improvement that the government worldwide are made, the situation become better, as more and more opportunities are offered by them. In developed

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, governments not only give financial support

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their own citizens

,

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but

also

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offer

helps

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help

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for

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to

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those

live

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living

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oversea.

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, they may give hands

on

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to

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the

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apply

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students who have no capability on chasing their

study

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studies

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due to

the

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apply

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poverty.

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, not to mention that some developed

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highly welcome

to

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apply

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immigrants who live in dangerous environments. In conclusion, people are having more and more choices nowadays

comparing

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compared

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with

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the past, while some places still show the limitations of choosing freely.