In the last decade, there has been a great increase in the number and variety of online courses available to adults. This has been welcomed as a great opportunity by many students, however, other students see these courses as less effective than classroom teaching. What are the advantages and disadvantages of studying an online course?
•In the past decade, there has been a signific increase in the number and variety of online
courses
accessible to mature. This
has been appreciated as a major chance by numerous of
Change preposition
apply
students
,in whatever way different students
see these courses
of studying as less beneficial than classroom teaching. There are certainly several reasons why they think so and there are advantages and disadvantages of studying online and
I will discuss Correct word choice
apply
about
Remove the preposition
apply
this
reasons.
• There are a number of significant benefits of studying online classes it is acceptable why of studying distance I concede that it is very comfortable and creates many connections for Correct determiner usage
these
students
and students
can get free education
through private lessons or study
in the direction of their choice, moreover
all students
can use
the online courses
of the teacher they want. There is a lot of material needed to study
online courses
and they can use
online courses
when students
have free time. For
example
Change preposition
For example
everyone
was shocked when the Covid-19 pandemic history planet. No one could ever leave their home, neither went to school nor to extracurricular activities, even the government did not know that everyone
does but at this
time no one stopped classes and everyone
took online classes studied online and older people
also
worked online but according to a survey of many humans, several people
prefer offline education
because in
offline Add the comma(s)
,in
education
, all students
can learn face-to-face with the teachers and they can also
use
them to understand the topics they do not understand or ask additional questions to learn what they do not know.
• Many people
think that offline education
has its downsides ,maybe so but just like everything else there are downsides to online education
and several examples such
shortcomings can be given, for
example
Add a comma
,example
everyone
needs a phone or computer to study
online and not everyone
knows how to use
it can be difficult to use
, moreover
everyone
needs internet to study
online and some village the internet is very low compared to the cities and this
is one of the biggest problems but nowadays the technology developing and the internet speed is increasing in the villages as well as the cities
• In conclusion, having everything mentioned up. I can come to conclusion
that distance learning has more benefits than Add an article
the conclusion
drawback
a light of the fact that teenagers can stay safe and many Fix the agreement mistake
drawbacks
people
in several countries prefer to get online education
and this
education
is very high quality a
• • •Submitted by Premium Version on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Fully explain your ideas
To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).
For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.