Plastic bags are used widely and cause many environmental problems. Some people say they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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modern world, it is undeniable that

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goods have

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one of the major environmental

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our society,

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some individuals believe that

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necessary to prohibite

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plastic

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bags

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in order to stop

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pollution. Personally, I completely agree with

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statement and

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essay will argue and provide arguments on

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statement. On the one hand, the initial reason

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banning

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is the fact that they can be one of the biggest

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disastrous

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nature. In fact,

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materials have

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characteristic of being preserved for a long time and

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of

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this

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they pollute not only our water but

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our land

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traveling

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very long distances by either wind or water.

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recent studies have

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that

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almost 57

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of sea creatures have died

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consuming

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bags

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.

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, prohibiting

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can

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enhance the economy as

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process cause an improvement in business for renewable bag manufacturers and

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lead to increased job opportunities.

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, the companies that manufacture the

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themselves can provide jobs to hundreds of humans while protecting the environment from widespread

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products.

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,

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goods are less prone to tearing, easier to carry and more useful in bad weather. In conclusion, I believe despite the fact that

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can be a great benefit to business executives and

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more job opportunities for individuals

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however

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, they have several devastating impacts on our planet.