Plastic bags are used widely and cause many environmental problems. Some people say they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In
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modern world, it is undeniable that
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one of the major environmental
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our society,
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some individuals believe that
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necessary to prohibite
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plastic
bags
in order to stop
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pollution. Personally, I completely agree with
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statement and
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statement. On the one hand, the initial reason
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banning
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plastic
bags
is the fact that they can be one of the biggest
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nature. In fact,
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characteristic of being preserved for a long time and
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they pollute not only our water but
also
our land
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traveling
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very long distances by either wind or water.
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recent studies have
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that
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almost 57
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of sea creatures have died
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consuming
plastic
bags
.
On the other hand
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plastic
bags
can
also
enhance the economy as
this
process cause an improvement in business for renewable bag manufacturers and
also
lead to increased job opportunities.
For example
, the companies that manufacture the
bags
themselves can provide jobs to hundreds of humans while protecting the environment from widespread
plastic
products.
Furthermore
,
plastic
goods are less prone to tearing, easier to carry and more useful in bad weather. In conclusion, I believe despite the fact that
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plastic
bags
can be a great benefit to business executives and
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more job opportunities for individuals
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, they have several devastating impacts on our planet.
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