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Some people say thhat the only reason for learnig a foreign langua is in order to tavel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Dear Sir, I am writing
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 letter to complain about the leashing dogs recently found in the Local
Park
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. Since the Local
Park
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 opening festival occurred in 2015, we were spending most of our leisure time in it. Feeling safe from any harm encouraged us to pick up our families
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 the Local
Park
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. Lately, it was noticed that the majority of people have let their dogs run off their leashes.
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 attitude had affected us in various ways
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 as feeling unsafe, annoyed by
dogs
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dogs'
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 sounds and experiencing fear
inside
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 our young children. I would like to propose some possible actions to be taken to limit the negative impacts
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 situation
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 as applying
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on
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 any individual accompanied
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free
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 dog in the Local
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.
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prevent
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 the accused person who
take
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penality
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 from visiting The Local
Park
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 for one week. I hope
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 solution will help to solve
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 situation at the earliest. Best Regards.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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