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Universities should accept equal members of male and female student in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is believed that
both
 gender men and
women
 must equally accept in all
subjects
 in college. I completely agree with
this
 statement. The impending essay will discuss the same with a logical conclusion. There are multiple reasons that universities must let men and
women
 equally attend in all
subjects
.
To begin
 with,
both
 men and female are able to implement the same skills
this
 is because learning education can create opportunities for
both
 members to acknowledge and learn lessons as they
both
 have the same brain abilities leading them to memorize
subjects
 and get high scores but those who prepared well.
For example
, the times has announced that almost 199 admissions were able to get a high score in order to apply for medical programs at york university as 1oo of them were female. 
Moreover
, it is believed that
women
 should not attend some physical
subjects
 because they are not able to perform well,
this
 contributes some colleges to not letting students who are female attend physical activity classes.
However
, an increasing number of
women
 enlisted
also
 agree with it. they try not to attend these classes, but in modern , societies individuals have completely different views.
In addition
, knowledge qualification should be the priory for all gender
this
 is because some students from
both
 sides are unable to accept all
subjects
 if it is selected by students will be a better choice.
However
, society struggle with a lack of professors in the future In conclusion, it is believed that educational places should accept genders equally in all lessons in universities. From my point of view, everyone has the law to attend all
subjects
 because it will prevent them from having a lack of professors.
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