A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

A number of individuals have judged other people's

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based on their social status and possessions these days;

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, some variables,

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as honour, kindness and truss, have been not likely pivotal for modern societies. I strongly disagree with the phenomenon because of at least two reasons, namely the lack of humanity and the detrimental impacts of

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of all, It is evident that

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an integral part of human life since

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years ago, including kindness, truss and honour.

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culture has made our civilization becoming more friendly

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without any

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, the

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led our citizens to be more individualistic recently because they mostly think that the most crucial factors in our

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are only social and financial status.

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, unless someone is rich, it is fine to be

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them.

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, some people prefer to give respect

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rich owing to their wealth

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of respecting

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Secondly

, the culture of judging someone according to their status would

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to the

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of flexing indirectly. The definition of

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is

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of showing their wealth to

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other people's intention.

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flexing is that someone may buy lots of expensive goods over their purchasing power.

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, they would use

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Nevertheless

, some of them fail to pay it

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and get problems from the

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payment. In

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, there is a phenomenon that a person's worth seems to be judged based on their wealth. I totally disagree with

this

because the culture could bring about drawbacks,

such

as lacking

of

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humanity

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and financial impacts of

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trend

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