Art galleries should provide free admission. To what extent do you agree?

In my opinion
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art
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galleries
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should provide free
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to some degree, but not be completely free of charge.
Children
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and
students
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should be able to get free entry to all
art
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galleries
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and national
art
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galleries
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must be free to everyone.
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of all, most people under eighteen and university
students
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don'
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have a steady income.
Art
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galleries
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can be viewed as a form of education so granting free
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group of people would encourage them to go and learn about
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. If the admission was priced,
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lower income
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families wouldn'
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be able to let their
children
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visit
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galleries
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.
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may discourage them from going in the future and would take away a part of cultural education.
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, national
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museums are a part of
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culture and history. Some
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galleries
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have exhibitions of national treasures and all citizens should have
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to take a look at it. Most of these
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already have government funding, so people should be able to
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them for free. National
art
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galleries
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should be made free of charge for everyone and
children
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and
students
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should be granted free
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to all
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galleries
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, private
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galleries
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don'
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have government funding and have to buy
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, pay employees and pay for restoration. Money that comes from admission tickets keeps them open. Not everyone could afford to go, but if they can'
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they could choose from more affordable or free options.
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a way to ensure damage control and overcrowding. To conclude, private
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galleries
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should have a right to decide on entry pricing for adults, but
students
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and
children
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should be let in for free.
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national
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museums should be free to the general public.

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