Some environmentalists have advocated building wildlife sanctuaries to protect and endangers spices discuss the advantages and disadvantages of doing this.

Some ecologists have advised that build wildlife sanctuaries to protect endangered species. As every garden has its weeds,
similarly
this
situation is both advantages as well as disadvantages and
this
essay will highlight both aspects. I believe that it is positive or escaped its negative. To commence with the views of advantages, it is very important to save wildlife species because every kind of animal has its own importance to the environment.
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, in ancient time dinosaur was extinct so the temperature of the earth was so high. Due to
this
reduction of rainfall in hill areas.
In a
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survey conducted by the
National
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Geographic Department found that most of the
specieswere
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species were
vanished so, it directly affected human beings. That's why the government should take a step to protect
animals
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species to build wildlife sanctuaries. Shifted toward the view of disadvantages, it was observed that the food chain is very necessary to balance the scenario. If we build a safe place for
animals
, so the other
animals
have to
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locating their prey. Due to
this
most of the creatures will be disappeared in the future.
Secondly
, every people and animal like to live in an open space so if we construct a zoo for
animals
they cannot live for a long time. They prefer to live in a forest or arrange their food own. To conclude
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this
, a well-balanced ecosystem purifies nature giving us clean air to breathe and healthy water to support diverse marine life. So it is important to protect wild
animals
.
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  • thirdly
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  • moreover
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