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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The number of male and female
students
 in universities should be equal. I totally disagree with
this
 idea.
This
 hypothesis is against social justice and student numbers in any course depend on the attraction of the lesson for each gender. There is not the slightest doubt in
this
 writer's mind about the fact that
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 the importance of defending women’s rights should be exaggerated by
the
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society. It seems that
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 it is harmful to social justice as well as, in
this
 way, the right of capable men
students
 will be lost. Undoubtedly having the same number of men and women in all degree courses is simply unrealistic. The number of
students
 is rooted in their choices, interests and talents regardless of their gender. Choosing
of
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deserving
students
 whether male or female serves as a remedy for social improvement. Social rights and
student’s
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 choices
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 a contribution to writing
this
 opinion. I totally disagree with
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 idea that
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 of university
students
 should be based on equal numbers of male and female
students
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender diversity
  • fostering innovation
  • educational experience
  • enforcing gender quotas
  • merit and potential
  • individual achievements
  • natural differences
  • gender equality
  • reducing gender stereotypes
  • balanced workforce
  • traditionally male-dominated or female-dominated fields
  • fluctuating applicant numbers
  • compromise on quality
  • diversity aspects
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