nowadays many
children
have filled their Use synonyms
times
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smartphones
. it can be Use synonyms
considerate
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modern
world as people's lifestyle has changed in different aspects. whether Add an article
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it is obvious that a lot of factors contribute to excessive use of a smartphone by kids. Linking Words
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, the availability Linking Words
to
new and cheap technological appliances like mobiles has been facilitated thanks to the advancement in Technologies. Change preposition
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secondly
, these days many families live in small apartments and most of them have an only child. Linking Words
consequently
, their Linking Words
children
are deprived of playing with their siblings in the yard. it may result in spending hours on Use synonyms
smartphones
in order to play or chat with their peers. Use synonyms
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, the lack of community spiritLinking Words
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makes parents Add the comma(s)
, especially in urban areas,
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their neighbors'
neighbors'
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neighbours'
children
. so, they prefer to keep them at home and provide them Use synonyms
more
facilities Change preposition
with more
such
as mobiles or video games to fill Linking Words
this
vacuity.
spending a lot of time on Linking Words
smartphones
is a mixed-blessing issue. Use synonyms
in other words
, it has its own advantages and disadvantages simultaneously. one of the most important merits is improving different learning skills including cognitive and problem-solving abilities. it Linking Words
also
promotes the coordination between eyes, ears and hands among pupils.
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on the other hand
, spending too much time on phones may bring about health problems. more precisely, it is along with Linking Words
sedentary
lifestyle which in turn, can cause different illnesses like obesity. Correct article usage
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moreover
, spreading Linking Words
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violence
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behavior
is another negative point of Change the spelling
behaviour
this
issue because many games are played in Linking Words
violent
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a violent
atmosphere
.
in conclusion, it is ordinary for today's Fix the agreement mistake
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children
to spend hours on Use synonyms
smartphones
every day. it happens mostly because of changes in individuals' way of life. I personally believe that it has its merits and drawbacks altogether. Use synonyms
however
, in my opinion, parents should set a constraint on the time Linking Words
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that
children
spend on phones in order to maximize its benefits.Use synonyms
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