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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finising high school and starting university studies. discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young peoplewho decide to do this.

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Young
students
 in some countries are motivated to visit somewhere or engage in a job for a year after finishing high
school
 till they enter
the
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university
.
This
 process has advantages and disadvantages too. In
this
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 I will discuss the plus points and bad points of work and travel between high
school
education
 and
university
education
. Nowadays, most
of
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the
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students
 prefer to do a job after high
school
 until
university
 entrance. There are some reasons for that. The main thing is they can earn during
this
 period and
this
 money can be spent
for
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 their higher
education
 and they can have good experiences by travelling.
Furthermore
,
students
 can invest these earnings. It will be profitable for their
future
.
Although
this
 will be a good experience for the life.
Students
 can manage their
future
 by taking these experiences as
guide
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.
On the other hand
, there are some disadvantages too. If a student starts to earn he could addict to it. They can lose
their
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interest in studying. If we consider
the
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travelling,
students
 can have bad influences due to
this
. For
an
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example,
students
 can addict to drugs and other bad things in society. That can badly affect to their
to
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their higher
education
 and
also
 their
future
. These are huge disadvantages of working and travelling before
university
education
. In conclusion, most
of
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the
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countries encouraged
the
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students
 after high
school
 to work or travel before
university
education
. It will be beneficial for
students
' economy and experience but in the same
way
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 bad habits can damage the student's
future
.
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