You have recently migrated to another country. Now write this letter to your friend to describe your present life. In your letter say.. When you have moved to this country Why you chose this country How things are now for you

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Dear Tyson, Hope you are doing well. I am very excited to let you know that I have moved to the United States to pursue my master's and PhD in Artificial intelligence. I have moved to

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country

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month and I really miss my family, friends and particularly our weekend outings.

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, I have found a path to continue my passion for the subject of Artificial intelligence. After years of research, I found

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country as the desired location to fulfil my academic and work goals.

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, I found it very hard to fit into

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culture,

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, I got tremendous support from the people who are native to

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country which made me adapt well to the current environment.

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, my academics session are started and find them more appealing. Let's connect through video call whilst you are available. I am looking forward to your response. Best regards, Vivek V

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

152 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

opportunity
culture shock
adjustment
adventure
language barrier
bureaucracy
immigration process
exciting
challenging
networking
international community
integration
support system
job prospects
standard of living
multicultural
diverse
satisfying

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