Nowadays many people believe that in spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
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devices
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essay will discuss the two main factors causing this
problem
.and the Correct your spelling
measures
mesures
that can be taken to solve it .
one of the main Correct your spelling
measures
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hunger
is the unequal distribution of agricultural products .in other term
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amount
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annual
anual
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distributary
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people
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in spite
wealthness
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wealthiness
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reason
reaason
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parts
people
actually go hungery
because of their ignorance .
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this
problem
is building of a good Correct your spelling
delivery
delievery
system that can reach Correct your spelling
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people
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poor
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detrimental
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definitely
deffintly
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people
to suffer from hunger
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awarness programmes
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awarness
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awareness
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especially
specialy
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hunger
worldwide.
in conclusion ,this
essay talked about the main factor of starvations ,
and offers ways to mitigate Remove the comma
apply
this
problem
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