You have recently migrated to another country. Now write this letter to your friend to describe your present life. In your letter say.. When you have moved to this country Why you chose this country How things are now for you

Dear Kamal, I hope you are doing well. I am really excited to share the news with you that

this

august, I moved to Canada.

This

year in July month, I got a letter from Georgian College that they accept my offer to join the project management course, which will help me in future endeavours.

Besides

, in Ontario, there are numerous I.T companies where I would easily get a job after finishing

this

course.

Hence

, I decided to move

this

provenance

last

month. After moving here, the initial days were hectic and I was swamped with college work,

however

, now everything is running with a flow.

Moreover

, I vacant my weekends for

this

so that I could go outside and explore the city and rejuvenate myself. If you will be free

this

Sunday give me a call, and we'll catch up there. I am looking forward to your response. Best Regards, Harwinder

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7 paragraphs

152 words

9.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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adventure
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international community
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