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Instant noodles, one of the fastest growing fast food in the food industry
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manufactured in various steps. The diagram describes the different stages involved in its manufacturing and production. The flour, which is obtained from the storage silos is transported to machinery. Here, the mixture of flour, water and oil is prepared. The mixture is
introduced to rollers. Now, the job of rollers starts it starts converting, that mixture into dough sheets. These dough sheets
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processed and go through various stages. The
step involves, converting it into dough strips. These strips are
converted into discs of noodles, which are
cooked and dried. The
step involves, packing them up in a cup with vegetables and spices. The
and probably the most important step of the process is labelling and sealing. These are the steps, that are involved in manufacturing and production of the famous fast food which is instant noodles
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