Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones for communication has a negative effect on young people's reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

in today's modern world ,the rising consumption of digital devices is

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believed

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fine

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like writing and reading .

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disagree with

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devices can

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example ,nowadays a lot of these equipment comes with a pen .and by

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as if we are writing on

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paper .

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of applications on it that allow us to open any e-book we want with

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and clear transition between pages .so it

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us the sense of reading a real book .

in addition

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utilized

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to teach students how to write and read along with many other

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started to

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their student

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instead

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of actual books and notebooks.the results of

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trend were remarkable and

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the end of the

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before .provided that their exams were

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. in

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digital age that we live in .we should focus more on how to make the maximum use of

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eqiupment

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equipment

. to conclude ,mobile and computers made our life easier .and enhance our

skills

even

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