Plastic bags are used widely and cause many environmental problems. Some people say they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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bags

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a lot which can lead to environmental pollution because these

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contain a number of chemicals.

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some experts say that these

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should not be produced. I concur wholeheartedly as

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,

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, the utilise of these

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is very harmful to the environment.

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, they can seriously harm

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humans

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health. On the one hand, nowadays,

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bags

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are

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quite of

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requirement

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.

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,

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commodity is

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huge disadvantage for our mother nature. Take

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for

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example, these

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have ingredients a lot of chemical

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substance

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therefore

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, they very slow decay and die out. According to the facts,

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may not burn for several centuries and may cause many fires on earth

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, some

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such

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production

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should be

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this

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this product

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really slow decay

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these have to be burned

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the

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air pollution and many diseases related associate

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health appear including Asthma and Bronchitis.

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, in some American countries, the

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of

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containers is completely prohibited.

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, it is better to

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more papers packet instance of

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containers. In conclusion, we can say that the

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of

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bags

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should be reduced because we can prevent environmental damage in

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way. In my opinion, it is better if we

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paper

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instead

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of using

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