This daysChange the determiner
show examples
, People are using
plastic
bags
a lot which can lead to environmental pollution because these
products
contain a number of chemicals.
Therefore
some experts say that these
products
should not be produced. I concur wholeheartedly as
firstly
,
First
, the utilise of these
products
is very harmful to the environment.
Secondly
, they can seriously harm
for Change preposition
show examples
humansChange the noun form
show examples
health.
On the one hand, nowadays,
plastic
bags
are
a Correct article usage
show examples
quite of
use
for
human'sChange noun form
show examples
requirementFix the agreement mistake
show examples
.
However
,
this
commodity is
extremelyAdd an article
show examples
huge disadvantage for our mother nature. Take
forAdd the comma(s)
show examples
example, these
products
have ingredients a lot of chemical
Fix the agreement mistake
show examples
substanceFix the agreement mistake
show examples
thereforeAdd the comma(s)
show examples
, they very slow decay and die out. According to the facts,
such
products
may not burn for several centuries and may cause many fires on earth
On the other hand
, some
of Change preposition
show examples
the
individualFix the agreement mistake
show examples
Correct pronoun usage
show examples
suchCorrect word choice
show examples
production
artifactChange the spelling
show examples
should be
because
this Change the determiner
this product
these products
show examples
products
really slow decay
causeCorrect word choice
show examples
these have to be burned
as a result
the Correct article usage
show examples
air pollution and many diseases related associate
mankindChange noun form
show examples
health appear including Asthma and Bronchitis.
For instance
, in some American countries, the
use
of
plastic
containers is completely prohibited.
Therefore
, it is better to
use
more papers packet instance of
plastic
containers.
In conclusion, we can say that the
use
of
plastic
bags
should be reduced because we can prevent environmental damage in
this
way. In my opinion, it is better if we
use
paper
bags
instead
of using
plastic
bags