young people should follow older people’s advice. do you agree?

people
aged
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and grow as time passes by, and as they grow older,
people
tend to get wiser
of
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in

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making choices since they have experienced
many
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much

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stuff compared to
younger
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the younger

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community. A lot of old folks suggest
things
to younger
people
as they think their bits of
advice
are more validated, unlike youngsters. Some
people
believe that
older
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the older

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community's instructions should not be
listen
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to all the time
at
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under

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any circumstances. It
is undoubtedly disagree
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is undoubtedly disagreed

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that every direction from
aged
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the aged

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community should be listened
by
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to by

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young
people
because old
people
could make mistakes too sometimes and the voice of smarter younger
people
would not be heard. To start off, as humans it is obviously normal to make false information even for old
people
with plenty of life experiences.
Furthermore
, as
young
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a young

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society, we should filter and select what
advice
we can carry on for ourselves. To elaborate,
people
sometimes make mistakes,
that is
why as
young
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a young

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society taking
advice
is good but we should probably not take that raw. To conclude, suggestions from older
people
should not be taken every time and at every event, we should select wisely pieces of
advice
that fit our conditions.
Secondly
, many times brilliant yet young
people
have a lot of great
things
in their mind
that
is
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are

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not considered by the older
people
regarding of their age. It is usual that young and aged
people
have different
things
on their minds.
For example
, a big event which is rengasdengklok
that
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apply

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occurred in the '90s when the youngster thought it is better to declare Indonesia's independence as soon as possible. It is
then
approved that the young
people
do not follow the old
people
's
advice
to wait long to declare Indonesia's freedom from colonialism and because of them, Indonesia proclamation their independence earlier.
therefore
, the young mind usually has brighter ideas that do not need other
advice
from older
people
. In conclusion, young
people
should not straightforward always follow older
people
's directions at all times because
people
make mistakes and sometimes young
people
have better
things
in their heads. For that reason, young
people
have
common
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a common

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sense
whether
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about whether

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advice
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the advice

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that
are
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is

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given is good or
otherwise
.
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