Some people say education is the only critical factor to the development of a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

One the one hand good
education
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is a highly recommended skill in the developed countries,
on the other hand
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of a question, try statement: "There are several reasons that make
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a key factor..."{end-tooltip} We must acknowledge that
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is something that we all need. The differences are just what we learn. Mostly the limited educational horizons of poor and less educated people have more to deal with their personal situation than with problems of bigger effects on a
country
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. Attending school is sometimes too expensive and it does not feed a family.
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there must be a reason for
education
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. For me it looks like some countries have realized that
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is the key for the globalization process. If we take India
for example
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we can see that a change in the educational system had changed the economy of the
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. {tooltip}The{end-link}That{end-tooltip}
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has changed from a poor region to a high potential {tooltip}aria{end-link}area{end-tooltip} for IT
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. In regard to
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fact {tooltip}it is a must that the Governments of less developed countries take the power{end-link}Rephrase (to improve sentence structure): Government must take the power... and offer...{end-tooltip} of
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seriously and offer it to a wide range of people. Spending money {tooltip}for{end-link}on{end-tooltip}
education
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is the key tippy {tooltip}to{end-link}for{end-tooltip} a new future effects on the economy and social life. All in all I agree with the importance of
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for the development of a
country
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. Less
knowledge
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leads to poverty and {tooltip}not to
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that has wide effects{end-link}
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expression is confusing{end-tooltip}. Learning and
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is Power and an investment in the near future and
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it has to be an official task.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cornerstone
  • pivotal
  • skilled workforce
  • innovation
  • productivity
  • economic growth
  • quality of life
  • reduced crime rates
  • civic participation
  • infrastructure
  • healthcare
  • political stability
  • government policy
  • investment
  • development indices
  • holistic approach
  • national development
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