Water shortage is a dangerous problem in the world. Discuss the consequences and solutions for this problem? And do the social media or newspapers spread the awareness among people? And examples which are relevant.

Nowadays, the shortage of water resources is now becoming a considerable issue in human society.
Moreover
, the consequences that come up with the issue might be
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such
as warfare between countries, market failures due to water shortage, or any other issues that come
day
after
day
.
In addition
, the information spread out from social media or newspapers is usually too obvious and exaggerated.
Therefore
, it might end up in society panicking excessively . The paragraph below will be discussing the consequences and solution to
this
situation and
then
give a clear explanation of how social media or newspapers relates to awareness among people.
To begin
with, there are several consequences that will be coming after a water shortage including, international conflicts, market failures and any possible issues. Many professional talents tend to suggest that all humans need to start
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the limited resources we have are still decreasing
day
after
day
, which shows how serious the problem is for
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