Human activities has had a negative impacts on lants and animals around the world. some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both and give your opinion.

In
this
world , Nature plays a vital role and is responsible for the balance of life on earth. Few believe that flora and fauna got disturbed worse , and it's tough to be reversed. While other few have positive hope of bringing new strategies and awareness to
this
problem. Though
this
essay agrees with the opinion of the
second
category of people, both views are analysed.
Firstly
, The flora and fauna are shrinking enough over the years for the purpose of sophisticated houses , buildings and factories for the improvement of the lifestyle of humans. While
this
can be reduced by constructing apartments
instead
of detached houses or villas.
Moreover
, compensating by planting more trees for the equal amount of area used for deforestation.
Such
ideas are being indulged in a few developed countries
such
as China with strict rules.
Furthermore
, the forest fire created by people for the coal.
This
results in low rainfall and global warming if there is no rain. Serious action with severe punishments must be implemented by the government against those people involved in burning forestry resources.
This
can
also
be corrected by conducting awareness programs by the local government of each and every local government body. In my opinion, the damage that happened to the environment of earth can be rectified by taking the required measures and slowly the mother can regain her complete power.
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