You should spend about 20 minutes on the task. The maps below show the layout of James Park in 2017 and the proposed changes to the park in 2027. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

You should spend about 20 minutes on the task.  

The maps below show the layout of James Park in 2017 and the proposed changes to the park in 2027.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.  

Write at least 150 words
The given maps
illustrates
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the current setup of James Park in 2017 and
juxtapsoses
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juxtaposes
juxtapose
juxtaposed
it against a future reorganisation of the park based on proposed
changes
after
rennovation
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renovation
. The most major
changes
are the proposed removal of the Toddler Playground to build a new Theater, the significant expansion of the Science Center by at least
one third
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its
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original size and the building of a
seperate
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separate
gymnasium alongside the Main Playground. The
changes
can be categorized as expanding the gamut of services offered by James Park currently to grow the number of monthly users
four-fold
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. The other
changes
are
enlargement
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the enlargement
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of the paths leading to each destination and the fountain being expanded to serve as a garden as well. The one thing that remains constant is the statue.
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, the most significant change is the repurposing of the earlier
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Toddler Playground to build a Theatre in its place.
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