Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What are the causes of this? What are some possible solutions?

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sentence is a very common way to punish lawbreakers, it can not only

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as a deterrent

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ensure

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of the public.

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, as we can now find more and more

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offenders today,

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arises that

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is ineffective in terms of building a safer society. In

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phenomenon and some feasible ways to address the problem. Putting all

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together could worsen their

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as they can make friends with each other,

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leading to

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possibility to commit

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crimes

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. To be more specific, wrong attitudes towards

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can be spread across the

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through their conversation.

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, when less serious crime committers hear the story

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terrible prisoners, they may find less guilty

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their

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more likely to do it again. They may

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be misguided and persuaded by those who have already

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used to re-offend and are indifferent to

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incorrect

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, they would prefer to keep committing more

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of living a normal life. To deal with

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issue, authorities can strengthen moral education in the

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and impose censorship on the content of prisoners’ communication.

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, those who committed serious

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and have negative emotions should be locked

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away from other

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, the

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could provide a better atmosphere for most

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prisoners

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. Another cause of re-offending is that

criminals

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may find it hard to find

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employment

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when they re-enter

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society since co-operations and factories would be particularly cautious with candidates with criminal records. Without any source of income, these former prisoners would possibly make a living by stealing or even

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. There are two ways to solve the problem.

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, vocational training should be provided by the

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as specific job skills can enable

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to find

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a job

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job

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more easily in the future. If they can be employed after being released, there is no need to commit

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crimes

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with

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income.

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,

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the government

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could issue unemployment

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to subsidies those who are jobless and struggling to live, so that they can at least be accessible to necessities. In conclusion, wrong attitudes towards

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and unemployment could be two of

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why former lawbreakers choose to become re-offenders.

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problem is devastating to social stability and should be highly regarded by the government. In my opinion, ways to address the root causes of the issue include strengthening moral education, better

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management and providing vocational training.