Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Other ever argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuses both on view and give your opinion

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, by and large, some different factors like motivation should be considered when criminals are being judged. Let us first explore the reasons for

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is performed for everyone having the same sin, an individual might leave an illegal activity which they think about it.

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and illegal activities,

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who are introduced as a vandal or graffiti.

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who have a light conscience.

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of a person who

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criminal into innocent. On the other side, some

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justifiably argue that the find must be different as the reason for that happening is an important factor for the verdict. It cannot be denied that,

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no a huge difference idea between someone who commits serial murder and another who

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the death of another in a car accident,

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they should not receive the same

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. In addition, the second group says in their discussions that, the fixed judge might affect the number of illegals. Take when the

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of some fraud ID cards are made by a criminal as same as

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who just make a passport for himself or herself as political problems cause

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, a person who performs illegal thinks about repeating it which is decreasing countries’ security. In conclusion, some arguments are

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who believe that the fixing

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disagree with it. Because motivation like other factors is effective on the consequence of finding. In my opinion, the reason for illegal is a significant factor when the judge and Jules want to decide on the

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of fraud, murder, etc.