Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Other ever argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuses both on view and give your opinion
It is suggested that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime
while
others
, by and large, some different factors like motivation should be considered when criminals are being judged. Let us first explore the reasons for the
both groups. From the first group standpoint, if a similar Remove the article
apply
judge
is performed for everyone having the same sin, an individual might leave an illegal activity which they think about it. Replace the word
judgment
Although
, an ill-wisher personality is a significant reason, however
, others
will receive some stress when knowing about the consequence of their mistake
and illegal activities, Change the noun form
mistakes
such
as a high find for people
who are introduced as a vandal or graffiti. As a result
, making stress because of information affects people
who have a light conscience. Furthermore
, fixing punishment is leading
to cause of preventing evasion of the law, taking deleting some notes which the prosecutions use to convert the Wrong verb form
leads
penalty
of a person who convicted
criminal into innocent. On the other side, some Add a missing verb
was convicted
people
justifiably argue that the find must be different as the reason for that happening is an important factor for the verdict. It cannot be denied that, Correct pronoun usage
there has
has
no a huge difference idea between someone who commits serial murder and another who Verb problem
is
cause
the death of another in a car accident, Correct subject-verb agreement
causes
then
they should not receive the same penalty
. In addition, the second group says in their discussions that, the fixed judge might affect the number of illegals. Take when the penalty
of some fraud ID cards are made by a criminal as same as others
who just make a passport for himself or herself as political problems cause this
person try
to make for Fix the infinitive
to try
others
because they will have some end an example. Then
, a person who performs illegal thinks about repeating it which is decreasing countries’ security. In conclusion, some arguments are done
among Verb problem
made
people
who believe that the fixing penalty
must be performed whereas
others
disagree with it. Because motivation like other factors is effective on the consequence of finding. In my opinion, the reason for illegal is a significant factor when the judge and Jules want to decide on the penalty
of fraud, murder, etc.Submitted by TUTOO on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion