The charts illustrate the participants in the olympics by gender and by totals

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based on

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in the Olympics,

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the line graph illustrates the total

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of Olympic

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from 1924 to 2014.

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, the

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of Olympic

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has jumped up exponentially since the competition’s debut.

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, the

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of male

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has always been the majority of the

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athletes

out of the two

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,

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, the gap between the

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of male and female

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has been narrowed as the

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of women participating in the Olympics has increased significantly throughout the

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.

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the bar chart, the

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of male

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has risen up consistently, from 3000

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in 1924 to 4500 in 1954,

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the rate slowed down, which resulted in only more than 5000

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in 30 more

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and reached its peak at approximately 6000

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in 2014.

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, the

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of female

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has soared sharply from not even 200

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in 1924 to almost ten times of it 60

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later.

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, the

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of female

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has climbed up quickly in the

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30

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in reached almost 5000

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, only lower than the

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of its male counterpart by roughly 1000

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. In accordance

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the line graph, the

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of

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participants

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doubled from the year 1924 to 1984, from approximately 3000 to 7000. In the

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30

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, the

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of

atheletes

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has gone up substantially, almost

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of its previous

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, from approximately 7000 in 1984 to more than 10000 in 2014.