many students take partime jobs while studying in university , you think it’s a good idea or bad idea.

There is no iota of doubt about the fact that Education is getting expensive every day and it's hard for parents to pay for their studies. Some

students

do jobs in their free

time

to support their

study

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. I think it is a good idea, in the given essay we are going to delve into

further

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.

To begin

with,

students

are studying so they can make money in future whenever they do

part

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time

job

, they not only learn how to make money but

also

get experience. in fact, a lot of

students

convert their

part

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time

job

into

full-

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time

job

after completion of their

study

.

For instance

, when food delivery companies hire full-

time

employees they prefer those who had done

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job

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as delivery men.

Thus

,

part

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job

embellish your profile as a

full

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employ

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.

On the other hand

, some

students

who

study

and do

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job

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together they could not able to manage both things together, which makes their life like a hell.

As a result

, they not only lose their

job

but

also

fail their examination.

for example

, a lot of

students

from India who did

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in Canada they could not able to complete their

study

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and in the

,

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end they had to come back to India. As a

consequnces

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consequence

consequences

, they lost

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and

study

both. In conclusion, Even though making money while

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is necessary

students

should manage both things together. In fact, if they can't manage it

then

they should prioritize their

study

over the

job

.