Influence of human beings on the world’s ecosystem is leading to the extinction of many species and loss of biodiversity. What are the primary causes of loss of biodiversity? What solutions can you suggest to protect endangered species and biodiversity?

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biodiversity
’s importance for
long
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time, human activity has
been
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cause
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massive extinctions of different
species
.
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essay will examine the main cause of
loss
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of
biodiversity
and possible solutions to
this
problem. The two main causes of
species
extinction are pollution and
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over exploitation
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of natural resources. When
human
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engage in industrial
activities
, they release pollutants to land, air and water. That process results in the pollution of our environment.
For instance
, Petroleum factories
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burn natural gas at the end of their production pollute the air and destroy the ozone layer.
This
action damages vegetation by interfering with
the
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photosynthesis. Because of that many
species
die out.
Also
, when the activity of harvesting a natural resource is too fast in a specific area,
this
natural resource becomes exhausted.
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frequent fishing does not leave enough time for the fish to reproduce and makes them disappear.
Thus
, human
activities
often deplete flora and fauna and cause
loss
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of
biodiversity
. Some possible solutions to
this
problem are protecting natural
areas
and promoting awareness among people. By protecting
areas
, we can
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limit
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or
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not allow human
activities
in those
areas
. That will help us fight against the
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over exploitation
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of natural resources. As an example, protected
areas
all around the world save
untouched
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environment
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and protect
species
from dying out.
Moreover
, the
next
step in fighting
biodiversity
loss
is informing
population
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about the dangers of
biodiversity
loss
.
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way communities will be more conscious
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the repercussions of
theirs
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actions on the environment. And they will take actions like recycling and reforestation. To conclude, human
activities
have a negative impact on the world's ecosystem.
However
, we can significantly lessen
this
phenomenon by protecting natural
areas
and promoting awareness among people
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Ecosystem
  • Extinction
  • Biodiversity
  • Habitat Destruction
  • Urbanization
  • Deforestation
  • Agricultural Expansion
  • Pollution
  • Contaminants
  • Climate Change
  • Overexploitation
  • Invasive Species
  • Nature Reserves
  • Marine Protected Areas
  • Sustainable Practices
  • Industrial Discharge
  • Carbon Emissions
  • Renewable Energy
  • Energy Efficiency
  • Reforestation
  • Public Awareness
  • Legislation
  • Habitat Restoration
  • Wetland Restoration
  • Coral Reef Rehabilitation
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