Some young people find school difficult and leave early without any qualifications. What causes this problem and what measures could help reduce it?

Nowadays the percentage of people giving up on their studies is growing.
This
essay will examine the main cause of leaving
school
and possible solutions to
this
problem. The two main causes of
school
dropouts are family economic issues and the distance between schools and
students
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homes.
First
of all,
school
fees are expensive and become exorbitant every year. Some
family
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families
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can not afford it and their children ought to withdraw from
school
.
For instance
, in my high
school
days, a girl student dropped out because her parents could no longer financially support her
education
.
Moreover
, when
school
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are
faraway
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,
students
are more likely to abandon their studies. As an example, a large number of
students
living in the countryside drop out because the majority of universities are in the cities. Some possible solutions to
this
problem are funding
students
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education
and online classes. Financially supporting people’s studies will help those who can not pay for their tuition.
For example
, scholarships granted to
students
around the world pay for their
education
.
Moreover
, with
internet
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,
students
can attend their
class
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classes
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online and graduate.
This
way,
students
will still
learning
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no matter the distance. To conclude, dropouts occur because of the
lacks
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of finance and
the
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distance.
However
, we can significantly lessen
this
problem by funding
peoples’
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education
and promoting online classes.
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