Some young people find school difficult and leave early without any qualifications. What causes this problem and what measures could help reduce it?
Nowadays the percentage of people giving up on their studies is growing.
This
essay will examine the main cause of leaving Linking Words
school
and possible solutions to Use synonyms
this
problem.
The two main causes of Linking Words
school
dropouts are family economic issues and the distance between schools and Use synonyms
Use synonyms
students
homes. Change noun form
students'
student's
First
of all, Linking Words
school
fees are expensive and become exorbitant every year. Some Use synonyms
family
can not afford it and their children ought to withdraw from Fix the agreement mistake
families
school
. Use synonyms
For instance
, in my high Linking Words
school
days, a girl student dropped out because her parents could no longer financially support her Use synonyms
education
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, when Linking Words
Use synonyms
school
are Fix the agreement mistake
schools
faraway
, Correct your spelling
far away
students
are more likely to abandon their studies. As an example, a large number of Use synonyms
students
living in the countryside drop out because the majority of universities are in the cities.
Some possible solutions to Use synonyms
this
problem are funding Linking Words
Use synonyms
students
Change noun form
students'
student's
education
and online classes. Financially supporting people’s studies will help those who can not pay for their tuition. Use synonyms
For example
, scholarships granted to Linking Words
students
around the world pay for their Use synonyms
education
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, with Linking Words
internet
, Add an article
the internet
students
can attend their Use synonyms
class
online and graduate. Fix the agreement mistake
classes
This
way, Linking Words
students
will still Use synonyms
learning
no matter the distance.
To conclude, dropouts occur because of the Change the verb form
learn
be learning
lacks
of finance and Fix the agreement mistake
lack
the
distance. Correct article usage
apply
However
, we can significantly lessen Linking Words
this
problem by funding Linking Words
peoples’
Change noun form
people’s
education
and promoting online classes.Use synonyms
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