Music
is a great context for getting together various types of
humans
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different ages, cultures, and gender are able to come together in order to
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music
.I
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this
idea strongly...Two basic factors push me to think like
this
.One of them is international
music
festivals
.At the time of international
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large number of people are collected
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centre.
even though
humans
do not share the same place, with
music
they can share similar feelings and thoughts.
Each year , especially developed countries are organized international
music
festivals
.Thank
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these
festivals
,
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music
are eager to attend these
festivals
. Each festival has
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topic and concept
such
as love, and peace in order to attract potential joiners.Those attending
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not only
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music
at the same time, they consider over festival topic and concept.
For example
, in my
the natives are organized
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for supporting the
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peaceful atmosphere. And some investigations are done by scientists over
this
music
festival.Survey shows us, with the commence of
this
festival, the rate of tourists are on the
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.So, it is fact that
music
festivals
help us to
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people
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the same direction.
Nowadays, especially teenagers are addicted to
music
on
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such
as youtube, Spotify, Vimeo... These platforms are
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great ways to express
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arts, and talents. In the old times, only a limited number of selection
humans
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, via these tools
humans
express their feelings and ideas
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music
. Even producers can take feedback from listeners from
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opportunity to
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among listeners and producers. As time roll on, some
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producers may transform
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popular people and it
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listeners. Those listening same person , Ecole or group create
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club on social media. By fun club,
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strong connection is created among to attender.
As a result
, it is clear that
music
has a powerful instrument to connect
humans
to each other.
Festivals
and social media, both of them play
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to get
humans
together...