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Many parents these days work in other countries, taking their families with them. Do you think advantages of the development outweigh its disadvantages?

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Nowadays, some
parents
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 have opportunities to work abroad, and they take their
family
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families
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 with them. It can take them much time to deal with a new job and family settlement, and
also
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 cost them a lot with living expenses. In my opinion,
however
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, the multitude of advantages that family members living with
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 abroad vastly outweighs the limited
disadvantages
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 that it offers
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parents
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. Undoubtedly, there are some drawbacks which show significant effects on
families
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 with
parents
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 working abroad.
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,
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 need to spend more money on current expenses, particularly on
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children
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’s tuition, housing rent and family
traveling
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 expenses.
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 there are perks of working abroad by partial companies, it is still a huge expense that
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 should consider.
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,
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 and
families
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 all face
life
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 exchanges,
culture
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 differences and language barriers when they live in a new country together.
Parents
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 need to adjust themselves to new jobs as soon as they can. Older family members try to build their social
life
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 in a new world.
For
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children
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, they may learn a new language faster in
schools
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 but they still have difficulties interacting with their peers and
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 unsafe during a friendship in their school
life
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.
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, these
disadvantages
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 may result in one parent inevitably needing to stay home to be the primary caretaker and will
thus
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 renounce any opportunity
of
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 employment and income. Despite the manifest
disadvantages
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 of
families
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 living abroad together, in
reality
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 most
parents
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 are well-planned with financial management and family care. In
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regard
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 I firmly believe that the multitude of advantages decisively outweighs the minimal
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 potentially gained.
Parents
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 bring about strong effects and serve as
a
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role
model
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on
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children
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’s
developments
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development
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. When
parents
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 spend more time with their
children
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, it benefits their
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children
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’s personalities. At the same time,
families
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 can help each other to get used to local
life
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 faster. Because
children
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 or older
families
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 interact with their peers or
neighbors
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,
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 makes it easier for an immigrant family to make friends and join monthly activities in the local communities.
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, living in
this
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 globalization world, it is necessary for
children
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 to learn a
second
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 language and improve their adjustments
in
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to
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 different cultural environments. In
this
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 process,
children
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 learn to respect different cultural
behaviors
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, expand their horizons, and develop their own perspectives on
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 world. In conclusion, living abroad with family offers a superior experience through helping each other, good
developments
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development
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 of
children
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 and expanding
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children
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’s horizons. By means of a good living abroad plan each family member will be presented with benefits from it.
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