You live close to a restaurant and have recently been disturbed by the noise coming from the restaurant in the evenings. Write a letter to the owner of the restaurant. In your letter ● explain why you find the noise disturbing ● suggest a way to solve the problem ● explain what you will do if the problem is not solved

Dear Sir/Madam, I am a resident of 44, 1st floor, Building no. 10, which is adjacent to your restaurant.

Also

, I am a regular visitor and a great admirer of the coffee served by your staff. I am writing

this

letter to express the inconvenience, caused to me due to the loud music in your restaurant. The majority of the residents in our area are school students, and during night events, the music volume goes much higher level as compared to other days from your place. As our exams are due

week, we are facing problems due to the noises coming from your lawn events. I wanted to raise a request on behalf of everyone, to reduce the sound till our exams get over or use a lesser bass level.

Moreover

, if possible, could you please organise these night events inside, rather than, on the restaurant lawn. Since we are sharing neighbourhoods, I do not want to take any other ways to resolve the issue which is why I am requesting you to understand our situation and do the needful.

However

, if you fail to consider our request, it would become necessary for us to raise

this

issue with the mayor of our society. I hope you would appreciate our formal request and

this

matter will be resolved through communication between us only. Feel free to reach out, if you think there is any other way to handle

this

situation. Your Sincerely, Shivam

Submitted by cshivam2675 on Sat Sep 24 2022

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