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Some people believe that university students should pay all the cost of studies because university education only benefit the students themselves not the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Get It has been a highly charged issue that
university
students
 bear the whole cost of studies because
the
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society
 can expect the least benefits from the
people
 of
university
 education.
However
, I oppose the idea that
university
students
 ᅟare responsible for their tuition.
First
 of all, many advanced countries adopted a system
which
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 the government lend money for
the
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university
students
’ tuition to the
students
 at
very
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low interest
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 rate.
Additionally
, the government
also
 do not require the
students
pay
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 back the money as soon as they graduated. If the
students
 cannot get a job, the government postpone the obligation to pay back the money until they are able to have a stable income. These are very obvious actions for
the
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society
 to share the burden to study in
university
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 with the
students
.
Thus
, any
society
 which is reluctant to help
the
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university
students
 financially need to learn the advanced societies’ policies to subsidize the
university
students
 for their tuition.
Secondly
, there is
a
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very evident proof that highly educated
people
 have tremendously contributed to improving the whole
society
 in many aspects. More specifically, most social or scientific innovations have come from the
people’s ideas
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people
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 who have studied in
university
.
For example
, Google, Apple and Microsoft are very actively seeking
people
 who have studied in
university
 and these companies have
also
 paid a huge amount of tax annually to the country, which can benefit the public in the country.
Thus
, nobody
cannot
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 deny the fact that
a
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society
 is receiving many benefits from the
people
 who have studied
in
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university
.
Accordingly
, the request to help
university
students
 financially should be seriously considered. In conclusion, the two obvious reasons which
are
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many advanced countries are providing many ways to lessen the financial burden of studying in
university
 and
university
 education is actually conducive to
make
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 our
society
 better
are strongly support
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 that
a
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society
need
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needs
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 to share the cost of
university
 education and encourage more
people
 to have a chance to study in
university
.
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