Some people believe that university students should pay all the cost of studies because university education only benefit the students themselves not the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Get It has been a highly charged issue that

university

students

bear the whole cost of studies because

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society

can expect the least benefits from the

people

of

university

education.

However

, I oppose the idea that

university

students

ᅟare responsible for their tuition.

First

of all, many advanced countries adopted a system

which

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the government lend money for

the

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university

students

’ tuition to the

students

at

very

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low interest

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rate.

Additionally

, the government

also

do not require the

students

pay

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back the money as soon as they graduated. If the

students

cannot get a job, the government postpone the obligation to pay back the money until they are able to have a stable income. These are very obvious actions for

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society

to share the burden to study in

university

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with the

students

.

Thus

, any

society

which is reluctant to help

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university

students

financially need to learn the advanced societies’ policies to subsidize the

university

students

for their tuition.

Secondly

, there is

a

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very evident proof that highly educated

people

have tremendously contributed to improving the whole

society

in many aspects. More specifically, most social or scientific innovations have come from the

people’s ideas

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people

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who have studied in

university

.

For example

, Google, Apple and Microsoft are very actively seeking

people

who have studied in

university

and these companies have

also

paid a huge amount of tax annually to the country, which can benefit the public in the country.

Thus

, nobody

cannot

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deny the fact that

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society

is receiving many benefits from the

people

who have studied

in

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university

.

Accordingly

, the request to help

university

students

financially should be seriously considered. In conclusion, the two obvious reasons which

are

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many advanced countries are providing many ways to lessen the financial burden of studying in

university

and

university

education is actually conducive to

make

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our

society

better

are strongly support

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that

a

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society

need

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to share the cost of

university

education and encourage more

people

to have a chance to study in

university

.