Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospitsal. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter -explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital -say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do -give details of when you would be available for this work

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Dear Sir or Madam, I come to know from the advertisement posted by your hospital management in the local newspaper about the welfare program you are going to organize the

month. You need

people

for social causes who can work without any salary. I would like to enrol my name into that programme. I am a Dentist and I have my own clinic in my residential space but I want to be a part of your programme to help

people

by doing free dental check-ups and by providing some free medicine too.

Moreover

, in case

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apply

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someone needs urgent treatment I'll be happy to do that. I like to help needy

people

when they are in need. I can be available in your hospital every Saturday and Wednesday from 10 AM to 2 PM because I take 2 days off from my clinic and I would love to spend those in helping poor and needy

people

. Looking forward to your positive reply, Yours Sincerely, Shikha

Submitted by shikha_dhingra on Sat Sep 24 2022

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